Monday, 1 February 2010

The World Can Be Too Much

You said it was all too much
Could no longer stand
It was hard to speak
When all of your world
Collapsed into grey
You were frozen by my delicate touch
Your shadows that burnt
You can no longer see
You no longer know how it is to feel
When you wake and your world
Doesn’t quite seem real
And the times that we kissed
Can’t make you heal
It wasn’t enough to be who you need
Fooled by everything,
Society’s greed
It brought you down,
A careless, chilling touch,
And now we see,
The world can be too much.

7 comments:

  1. When you have an eye to care
    U see suffering everywhere.
    It is a crying shame
    That needs to tame!

    Don't lose faith, try and make little things better to lesson and soften the harder blows! Thank you. Take care. Bye.

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  2. Don't lose touch
    With too much.
    Reach for stars
    From prison bars.

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  3. Blow me a kiss
    I'll not miss
    When I pluck
    Out a luck
    With my mind's eye
    With tears sigh!

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  4. Please take this last comment as none sexual, but as one caring person to another. I like your style, you've got prospects. I've been a nice person living a shit life - tut! Comment back to me, I'd like to speak to you. Thank you. Take good care. Bye.

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  5. a glomba ding
    a widdly ping
    a lomba wing
    a fiddly sing

    You take the good, you take the bad, you take them both and there you have the facts of life...the facts of life.

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  6. Dance your woes away
    With loves sway
    Reiterate say
    Too all play.

    I ave seen ugly too in all the nooks and crannies of societies trash kept secrets! I like poetic verses, well done. And bye the way, I had one and was taken, you are mistaken. Read between the lines. Ha. Good luck to U my friend. Take care. Bye.

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  7. Just to give you clues and straightforward information, I was with kayliegh and her Mother took me from her to her bed, she was gutted, I was also drunk which made me less afraid. Think of my alters, she had implants, my asking Kayliegh back out, I never had intercourse for nearly nine years! SAD. And what would be wrong with two, if you're respecful of each other and nice and thoughtful and generous and kind, and all of the good things! Love love. Thank you. Take share. Bye.

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